The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram provides information regarding the process of a central heating system in a

house

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Overall

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, what stands out from

this

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diagram is the method to make heat weather start from cold

water

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in the

house

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. Before, it is sent to small tubes to heat air in the home. When cold

water

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from the outside is sent into the

house

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this

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water

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will feed to the storage tank. After that

water

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in the tank will be sent two ways. The first way is

water

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is exported to the boiler (gas or oil) and it is passed to hot

water

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radiators.

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, it becomes warm air for changing cold weather in the

house

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In addition

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, after that

water

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will become cold

water

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and it is passed to the pump and storage tank. The second way is

water

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will run to the tap for sanitary wares in the restroom or bathroom for use in the future.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Central heating system
Boiler
Radiator
Pipes
Circulate
Heat source
Thermostat
Convection
Combustion
Energy-efficient
Flow rate
Expansion tank
Hot water cylinder
Insulation
Temperature control
Pump
Valves
Heat exchanger
Programmable
Zoned heating
Renewable energy
Double glazing
Carbon footprint

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The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some museum charge entry fees while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging an entry fee outweight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and • explain what happened • describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it • find out what they are going to do about it

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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