The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information regarding the process of a central heating system in a
house
.
Overall
, what stands out from
this
diagram is the method to make heat weather start from cold
water
in the
house
. Before, it is sent to small tubes to heat air in the home. When cold
water
from the outside is sent into the
house
,
this
water
will feed to the storage tank. After that
water
in the tank will be sent two ways. The first way is
water
is exported to the boiler (gas or oil) and it is passed to hot
water
radiators.
Moreover
, it becomes warm air for changing cold weather in the
house
.
In addition
, after that
water
will become cold
water
and it is passed to the pump and storage tank. The second way is
water
will run to the tap for sanitary wares in the restroom or bathroom for use in the future.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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