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The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the diagram
illustrated
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illustrates
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process
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the process
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 of
central
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a central
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 heating system in a house.
overall
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,
this
Linking Words
 process
consist
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consists
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 of several
stage
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stages
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witch strat
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which start
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by fill
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with filling
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Use synonyms
storage
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the storage
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tank
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 with
water
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 and
final
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the final
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 stage is
heat
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heating
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water
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go
Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
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 through small tubes.
To begin
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 with,
water
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 in
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storage
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the storage
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tank
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overflow
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overflows
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 in the pipe,
then
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 it has two
way
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ways
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, one way run to hot
water
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 to taps and meanwhile go to
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storage
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a storage
the storage
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tank
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, afterward the
water
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 in
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storage
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the storage
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tank
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boil
Correct subject-verb agreement
boils
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 with gas or oil and
fallowung
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following
fallowing
this
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boilwater
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boil water
boil-water
 pump to
radiator
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the radiator
a radiator
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 in house, next cold
water
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 go to small tubes.
This
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 cycle continues
while
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environment
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the environment
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 of
house
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the house
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getting
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gets
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heat
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heated
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words storage, tank, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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