The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram
illustrated
Wrong verb form
illustrates
process
of Correct article usage
the process
central
heating system in a house.
Correct article usage
a central
overall
, this
process consist
of several Change the verb form
consists
stage
Fix the agreement mistake
stages
witch strat
Correct your spelling
which start
by fill
Change preposition
with filling
storage
Correct article usage
the storage
tank
with water
and final
stage is Correct article usage
the final
heat
Wrong verb form
heating
water
go
through small tubes.
Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
To begin
with, water
in storage
Correct article usage
the storage
tank
overflow
in the pipe, Fix the agreement mistake
overflows
then
it has two way
, one way run to hot Fix the agreement mistake
ways
water
to taps and meanwhile go to storage
Add an article
a storage
the storage
tank
, afterward the water
in storage
Correct article usage
the storage
tank
boil
with gas or oil and Correct subject-verb agreement
boils
fallowung
Correct your spelling
following
fallowing
this
boilwater
pump to Correct your spelling
boil water
boil-water
radiator
in house, next cold Add an article
the radiator
a radiator
water
go to small tubes. This
cycle continues while
environment
of Add an article
the environment
house
Add an article
the house
getting
Wrong verb form
gets
heat
.Wrong verb form
heated
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words storage, tank, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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