The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram
illustrated
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illustrates
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process
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the process
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of
central
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a central
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heating system in a house.
overall
,
this
process
consist
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consists
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of several
stage
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stages
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witch strat
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which start
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by fill
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with filling
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storage
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the storage
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tank
with
water
and
final
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the final
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stage is
heat
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heating
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water
go
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goes
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through small tubes.
To begin
with,
water
in
storage
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the storage
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tank
overflow
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overflows
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in the pipe,
then
it has two
way
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ways
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, one way run to hot
water
to taps and meanwhile go to
storage
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a storage
the storage
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tank
, afterward the
water
in
storage
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the storage
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tank
boil
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boils
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with gas or oil and
fallowung
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following
fallowing
this
boilwater
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boil water
boil-water
pump to
radiator
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the radiator
a radiator
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in house, next cold
water
go to small tubes.
This
cycle continues
while
environment
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the environment
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of
house
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the house
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getting
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gets
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heat
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heated
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words storage, tank, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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