In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.What are the advantages and disadvantages ofgiving children this message?

In many cultures, people raise their

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through

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. They told their child as long as they worked hard, they could achieve everything. From my prospect,

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could bring both advantages and drawbacks to

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. The main advantage that telling

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to

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could bring is self-confidence. In contemporary society, with the increasing pressure in life and competition among peers. People, especially

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, tend to question themselves more often as an act of lacking confidence. Telling them putting effort could make a difference is a great way to encourage them to do their best to achieve goals, which could help establish self-confidence.

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intensify their belief that their efforts are worthwhile so that they could be more willing to take

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, the more

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children

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receive, the more possibilities they have. The reason why people always criticise Chinese education is because lacking of

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.

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are afraid to talk, play and make mistakes, making Chinese students less creative and failing to think and achieve big.

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as research finds out, most

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who later become successful are often raised through their parents'

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. There is a tied bond between success and

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which cannot be ignored. Each coin has two sides, drawbacks

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exist when telling

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that they

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achieve everything through hard work. Teenagers may become overconfident and even arrogant. They might think they

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achieve everything as long as they work hard, making them less focused on the choice of path or method they have. They might choose a difficult method though there are some which could cost less.

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, the overconfidence that telling the

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might bring could

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make

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set up goals which are much higher than their ability. And as soon as they find out that they are not able to achieve it, depression and other mental illnesses might come.

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, it is true that establishing

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’s confidence through

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has significant benefits, but the

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it might bring are

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important to be aware of and prevent.