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Writing Samples
Band 4

You are travelling and need someone to do you a favour while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbour or friend for help. In your letter include:

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Hai
Jassmine
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Jasmine
, How are you ,Hope you are doing
good
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well
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. The
reasion
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reason
 behind
this
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 letter is
acuatlly
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actually
 in an emergency
iam
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I am
 leaving home for 3 days.My mother has
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been hospetialized
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hospetialized
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hospitalized
due to
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 health issues i will be back in
3days
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3 days
.
Dear
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Dear,
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 the thing is you have to water the plants because
its
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it's
it is
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 too hot outside ,If you are busy
incase
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in case
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 please inform
to
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apply
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one of my friends who are staying beside
of
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apply
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our house .If in case any any
emergrncy
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emergency
contact me
i
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I
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 will provide my phone number.
otherwise
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, if you want to stay
overthere
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over there
 you can without any objection
fell
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feel
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 free ,and take care of my house
have
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and have
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 a look
on
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at
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 it for three days. yours lovingly, chitti.

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task achievement
Ensure that you address all parts of the prompt. Mention your trip and reasons more clearly.
coherence cohesion
Organize your paragraphs to convey one idea in each one. This makes your letter more understandable.
other
Double-check for spelling and grammar errors to improve clarity.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and polite, which is suitable for asking a neighbor or friend for help.
greeting and closing
You've added a closing that indicates gratitude and warmth.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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