The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the total
minutes
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calls
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divided
devised
in
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into
of
1995 to 2002.
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apply
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local
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a local
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it
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declined
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apply
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International
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maintenance
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since started. Correct your spelling
increased
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the percentages
percentages
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percentage
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calls
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were 72
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to
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billion
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2002.
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types
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calls
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and International Correct your spelling
national
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calls
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