Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold the view that

children

should be taught by their parents

while

others assert that public education might do that better.

Although

both views have their own logic, I still support the former

due to

its merits. When

children

live with their parents, they can learn about human-treated

skills

and behaviours.

This

kind of knowledge will easily be gained by kids if they have enough time to be close up with their “teachers”,

thus

allowing

children

to attend

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society with confidence.

For instance

, Vietnamese students educated by their parents could perform their characteristics more efficiently than

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school

-instructed counterparts.

On the other hand

,

children

attending

school

may find social

skills

and problem-solving methods less difficult to gain rather than learning

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at home. It is true that public education could give kids a perfect environment to show off and enhance

such

kind of necessary

skills

, which means that

children

can not use

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social

skills

without the support of

school

. In conclusion,

while

people are supposed to say that learning at home is better than

school

and others have

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contrasting view, I wholeheartedly support the former because of learning

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behaviour methods, which can not be gained in

school

.