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The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)

The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)
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The line chart
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 the data about the percentage of
female
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females
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 who
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have
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 joined
into
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parliament seats in five
differents
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different
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 nations in Europe between 2000 to 2012.
Overall
, it
is illustrates
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 by the amount of proportion that people which is female gender who
has
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have
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 joined into
parties
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party
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 seats after
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being
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 selected
form
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from
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 their
populaiton
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population
 in each
countries
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country
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 in Europe.
However
, since
started
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the started
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 two Nations
which has been
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have
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 increased. Despite
that
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 The UK is rapidly rose up.
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, Germany
is
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fluctuated whilst Belgeim
seems
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 rise up
then
 touching
in
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 the same point.
To begin
 with, Germany
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started
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 in the highest proportion but still
sit
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sits
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 in the same position in 12 years era.
On the other hand
 start at the
secend
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second
 high but reach at top of
female
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females
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 who
is join to
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joined
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 parliament
in
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at
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 the end of
period
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the period
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 time. At
last
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last,
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 The UK was only one of
tha
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the
country
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countries
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 which
is start
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started
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 at
bottom
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the bottom
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 of
beginning
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, but extremely
inceased
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increased
 in every term of
eclectionand
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election and
 touching the same point
with
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as
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 Belgium.
MOving
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 ahead, France is another nation that women are interested in a nation
patries
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parties
pastries
.
Nevertheless
, it
is
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has
been
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decreased
gradualy
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gradually
 and
rise
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rose
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 up in
middle
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 of
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the secone
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secone
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second
 term of
electional
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the electional
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. On the
ther
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other
 hand, Belgium is another nation that
poeple
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people
are
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focusing
in
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on in
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a
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the
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 year
of
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2000 to 2004 but after that sit
in
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at
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 the same point.
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