The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart gives information about the highest
amount
of
electricity
that
countries
all over the world consumed and
also
produced in 2014.
It is clear that
China and the USA had the biggest number in both production and consumption compared to other
countries
with a wide margin.
In contrast
, Korea was at the bottom of the list on the subject of consuming
as well as
producing
electricity
. The only country that its people used more
electricity
than the
amount
which they produced was Germany with 526 and 282 respectively. China produced five times more than Russia with nearly 5400 billion kWh in
this
year. European
countries
such
as France and Germany had almost the same
amount
of production and consumption with around 550 billion kWh. Canada was in the middle of
this
list, their consumption was almost equal to the half of
electricity
which Russia used in their country. We saw that except for Germany, other
countries
could meet their needs for
this
energy from their production.
In other words
, they produced the
amount
of energy that they used during
this
year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, electricity, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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