The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart gives information about the highest
amount
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of
electricity
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that
countries
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all over the world consumed and
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produced in 2014.
It is clear that
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China and the USA had the biggest number in both production and consumption compared to other
countries
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with a wide margin.
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, Korea was at the bottom of the list on the subject of consuming
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producing
electricity
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. The only country that its people used more
electricity
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than the
amount
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which they produced was Germany with 526 and 282 respectively. China produced five times more than Russia with nearly 5400 billion kWh in
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year. European
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as France and Germany had almost the same
amount
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of production and consumption with around 550 billion kWh. Canada was in the middle of
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list, their consumption was almost equal to the half of
electricity
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which Russia used in their country. We saw that except for Germany, other
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could meet their needs for
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energy from their production.
In other words
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, they produced the
amount
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of energy that they used during
this
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year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, electricity, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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