The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis.

The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis.
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The illustration gives information regarding the photosynthesis process.
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, there are 3 cyclical stages capturing light energy, before absorbing water and carbon dioxide and ending in extracting oxygen.
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, having completed all of these steps, the whole process will begin again. The most logical point to start at is when chlorophyll absorbs light energy and green wavelengths which were created from the sun, before making the plants have the outlook green. Once the green appearance has been completed, carbon dioxide comes into the stomata which belong to the leaf’s epidermis and cuticle, and combines with water from the roots and sunlight in order to form sugar. Throughout the next phase, starch is formed and contains excess glucose so as to keep plants alive.
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step, oxygen and water are released and lead to transpiration where causing the loss of the plant’s steam. The final stage of the cycle is when oxygen vapour exits and becomes part of the air for people to breathe, and
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the photosynthesis cycle begins again.

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