The charts bellow give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The
figuers
illustrate the data about the Correct your spelling
figures
UK
as a travel destination as well as
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
british
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British
tourists
that visited different nations over a 20-years
period.
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20-year
Overall
, it can be seen that the UK
citizens were excited about travelling to other countries instead
of staying in their hometown
. Fix the agreement mistake
hometowns
Also
, France and Spain were the most popular destination
among them.
First of all, in 1979 the rate of Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
british
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British
tourists
were
at almost the same level Change the verb form
was
of
people who came from other nations to Change preposition
as
the
England with only about 10 Correct article usage
apply
millions
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million
visitors
. In the next 5 years besids
a minor growth in foreign Correct your spelling
besides
beside
tourists
number, the rate of travelling to outside of the UK
got doubled in1989. From 1984 to 1999, the number of the
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apply
UK
visitors
was
experienced a dramatic Unnecessary verb
apply
surged
which increased Replace the word
surge
more
than one-third per cent and reached Change preposition
by more
to
52 Change preposition
apply
millions
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million
visitors
. However
, over this
period the rate of visitors
from outside rose gradually and was seen
a 15% rise in total.
Second of all, in 1999 , France was the most popular destination for Wrong verb form
saw
english
citizens with more than 11 Change the capitalization
English
millions
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million
visitors
. Furthermore
, Spain with 4 millions less
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million fewer
tourists
in comparison to France stood in the secound
most attractive Correct your spelling
second
places
. Fix the agreement mistake
place
However
, Turkey with only 3 millions
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million
visitors
was
was the least popular place Unnecessary verb
apply
between
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among
british
people.Change the capitalization
British
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