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The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the number of
tea
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 and
coffee
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was bring
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brought
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 from abroad in
Canada
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, the United Kingdom,
United
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the United
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 States of America and
Germany
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 by
tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
tea
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 was extremely high imported in the UK and USA rather than in
Canada
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 and
Germany
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. The number of
coffee
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 was almost the same in four countries.
According to
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 the chart,
UK
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the UK
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 was the highest importer of
tea
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 about 160000
tonnes
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. The second highest buyer of
tea
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 was the USA approximately 110000
tonnes
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. In
Canada
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 and
Germany
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 was a smaller amount of
tea
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 imported.
Germany
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 imported
40 000
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40,000
tonnes
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 of
tea
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. Whilst
Canada
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 brought in 20000
tonnes
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 of
tea
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.
On the other hand
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, the imported
coffee
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 was almost the same in the four countries. The number of
coffee
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 was imported in 40 000
tonnes
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 in
Canada
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 and USA.
However
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, The UK bought by double less about 20000
tonnes
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.
This
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 date of
coffee
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 was nearly 43000
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, germany, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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