The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the number of
tea
and
coffee
was bring
Wrong verb form
brought
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from abroad in
Canada
, the United Kingdom,
United
Correct article usage
the United
show examples
States of America and
Germany
by
tonnes
.
Overall
,
tea
was extremely high imported in the UK and USA rather than in
Canada
and
Germany
. The number of
coffee
was almost the same in four countries.
According to
the chart,
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
show examples
was the highest importer of
tea
about 160000
tonnes
. The second highest buyer of
tea
was the USA approximately 110000
tonnes
. In
Canada
and
Germany
was a smaller amount of
tea
imported.
Germany
imported
40 000
Correct your spelling
40,000
tonnes
of
tea
. Whilst
Canada
brought in 20000
tonnes
of
tea
.
On the other hand
, the imported
coffee
was almost the same in the four countries. The number of
coffee
was imported in 40 000
tonnes
in
Canada
and USA.
However
, The UK bought by double less about 20000
tonnes
.
This
date of
coffee
was nearly 43000
tonnes
.
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