In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

In recent years, the alarming rise of extinction of natural

species

, especially animals and plants,

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a pressing concern. It poses a significant threat to the global ecosystem. Henceforth,

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essay delves into the multifaceted causes behind

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phenomenon and explores potential solutions to mitigate

further

detrimental impacts on the earth's biodiversity. The primary driver for

this

issue is the proliferation of

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population which causes the wildlife’s habitat loss. The rapid development of infrastructure and property

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leading to the degradation of natural habitats.

For instance

, the establishment of Indonesia’s new capital city, Nusantara, resulted in the destruction of the world’s third-largest rainforest.

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,

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endangered animals

such

as

orangutan

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orangutans

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and local

tiger

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tigers

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have been gone,

further

impacting the sustainability of other creatures’

life

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lives

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.

Furthermore

, the goods demand escalation driven by

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human consumption

also

exacerbate

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the plight of endangered

species

. Various human necessities

such

as foods, cosmetics, and

furnitures

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required

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industrial-scale production of

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fauna and flora.

For example

, the studies show the overexploitation of marine resources for

human’s

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dietary and cosmetics

resulted

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a significant depletion of salmon, threatening its existence.

While

it may be concerning, the multifaceted efforts encompassing regulatory intervention and societal shifts

needed

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to

addressing

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this

crisis.

Firstly

, the government should enact stringent construction regulations to safeguard

remaining

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natural area. The law

have

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to

strictly

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implemented

to

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the restricted

area

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and

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robust penalties and punishments for for illegal wildlife trade. In parallel, shifting the paradigm of sustainability in daily consumption will be beneficial to the

species

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existence. The authorities and non-governmental organizations should promote

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sustainable lifestyle,

such

as

recycle

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recycling

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,

reduce

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reducing

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, and

reuse

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. By advocating

this

kind of lifestyle, it will mitigate the adverse impacts

of

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wildlife and biodiversity. In conclusion,

species

extinction arguably

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one of most world’s concerning

issue

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issues

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.

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,

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collaboration between government and

citizen

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citizens

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needed

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to reduce deforestation by

protect

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the natural area and shifting more sustainable lifestyle.