The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates three types of materials were used between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
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, butter consumption had decreased dramatically over the period,
whereas
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the low fat and reduced spreads increased rapidly in a short period. Margarine was the
last
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item which fluctuated throughout the years. It can be seen that in 1981, butter was the highest amount just over 140
grams
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before it went up to nearly 160
grams
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in 1986. After 1986, the decreasing trend had started until it finished with around 50
grams
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in 2007. Margarine was another item which had downward and upward from 90
grams
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to 100
grams
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then
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it stayed constant between 1981 and 1996. After 1996, it declined to the lowest value with 40
grams
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in 2007. From 1996 to 2007, there was a huge rise from 10
grams
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to around 85
grams
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between 1996 and 2001. But there was a slight fall of around 15
grams
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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