The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country bbetween 1979 and 2004
the visual representation delineates the life
consumptions
in a specific European nation from 1979 to 2004
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consumption
overall
, it can be observed that even though the chicken saw a proliferation in individual consumption
, the other experienced some decreases. additionally
, while
the beef consumption
was the highest rank at the beginning, it was substituted by the chicken one eventually.
looking at the personal consumption
of beef, which commenced at roughly 210 grams
in 1979. during the next 10 years, it witnessed a fluctuation in the range from approximately 170 to 240 grams
, despite rapidly going down to just over a hundred grams
at the end
of the timeframe. As for the chicken, of
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consumption
began at under 150 grams
prior to slowly climbing up to around 250 gram
in 2004 of the period.
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grams
consumption
that started at literally 150 grams
in 1979 before it plumped to in the neighbourhood of 100 grams
in 2004. meanwhile, the individual fish consumption
almost remained steady at around 50 grams
during the duration.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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