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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country bbetween 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country bbetween 1979 and 2004
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the visual representation delineates the life
consumptions
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 in a specific European nation from 1979 to 2004
overall
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, it can be observed that even though the chicken saw a proliferation in individual
consumption
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, the other experienced some decreases.
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 the beef
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 was the highest rank at the beginning, it was substituted by the chicken one eventually. looking at the personal
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 of beef, which commenced at roughly 210
grams
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 in 1979. during the next 10 years, it witnessed a fluctuation in the range from approximately 170 to 240
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, despite rapidly going down to just over a hundred
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at the end
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 of the timeframe. As for the chicken,
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consumption
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 began at under 150
grams
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 prior to slowly climbing up to around 250
gram
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 in 2004 of the period. turning to the lamb
consumption
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 that started at literally 150
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 in 1979 before it plumped to in the neighbourhood of 100
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 in 2004. meanwhile, the individual fish
consumption
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 almost remained steady at around 50
grams
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 during the duration.
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