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The charts below show election participation by age, gender, and income in Japan between 1990 and 2010.

The charts below show election participation by age, gender, and income in Japan between 1990 and 2010.
The three charts show
election
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participation
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 by age, gender, and income in
japan
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Japan
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 from 1990 to 2010.
First,
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it is noticeable that
people
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 between 21 and 30
years
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 old and elderly
people
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 over 51
years
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 old showed a constant increase in
election
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participation
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 throughout the
period
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. In 2010, two age groups (21-30
years
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 old and over 51
years
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 old) were roughly equal to approximately 70%, which was the highest rate among all age groups.
In contrast
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,
people
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 between 41 and 50
years
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 old remained the lowest over the
period
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.
Additionally
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, it is noteworthy that males'
election
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participation
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 was higher than females'
election
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participation
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 throughout the
period
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. The gap between the rate of men's and women's
participation
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 became narrow by the end of the
period
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. Females'
participation
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 rose significantly from about 20% in 1990 to 53% in 2010.
According to
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 the
last
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 chart, it is seen that
people
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 who earned less than 20,000 dollars showed higher
election
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participation
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 rates,
this
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 figure was continuing over 60%. Interestingly, the
participation
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 rate remained almost the same during the
period
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 among all groups.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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while
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participation
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 was low among middle-aged
people
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, males voted more than females.
Lastly
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,
people
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 who earned more than 60,000 dollars were less likely to vote over the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words election, participation, people, years, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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