Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that parents should motivate their

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to participate in

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programmes during their spare time,

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others have the opinion that

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should know how to keep themselves occupied. If

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are allowed to take

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activities, they will learn how to mingle and work with various people, building a sense of unity.

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, if they can find their own task to do, they can be more productive in any talent they like.

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, in my opinion, it is better that

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choose which method is best for them as each person is different, some may be introverts and some extroverts, who would only do better if left free in a surrounding they are comfortable in.

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taking

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in

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activities will learn the

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to work with and plan different

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together,

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helps them learn the

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of unity, which is helpful for their future careers. As working in

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cooperation between different people in a multidisciplinary approach, exposing

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to these situations during childhood will be a great asset for their future goals.

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, it was found that, it was those doctors who took

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during their childhood, showed more compassion to their patients and who took a collective decision with other doctors in case of treatment plans. Meanwhile, taking

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helps them meet and interact with people of different backgrounds, ideas and interests.

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can widen their knowledge and provide them

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platform to share their ideas, discuss and get feedback, enhancing their education.

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, if

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are allowed to decide how they want to occupy themselves, it helps them find what particular

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they are interested in. In

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, they have to have a common opinion and may not always get a stand on their own or do what they prefer the most, but if they are alone, they will do what is best for them. Not only does it help them find a new

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, but it

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gives them room to practise their

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and excel in the future.

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gives them more focus and attention to something that they like. It was found that those

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who spent most of their time alone during their young ages developed a unique

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. Most artists and celebrities who are famous

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have found their talent themselves

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being alone rather than being involved in groups. In conclusion,

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encouraging

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to take

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in

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activities to help them widen their knowledge, exposure and sense of oneness is a positive aspect, allowing them to occupy themselves to know what is best for them is

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a good side.

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, it is best that

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choose which method they prefer as each person has a different taste.