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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in highschools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Art
 classes,
for example
, painting and drawing, are playing a vital role
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development
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 of children as other subjects,
therefore
,
it
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they
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 should compulsorily
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 in high schools.
This
 writer agrees with
this
 statement because
art
 can develop
students
 in different ways.
Firstly
,
art
 education enhances creativity and imagination in
students
, providing them with a platform to express themselves uniquely and innovatively. Many wealthy people
said
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 that if a child
wanted
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wants
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 to be successful whether in life or in
career
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, he has to enhance three things: knowledge,
art
, and health. For
the
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art
,
this
 is a wide range of
field
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fields
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,
such
 as music, drawing, and painting. Each one is a creation of various
colors
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 and distinctions.
Therefore
, with
art
, people can show
up
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their style. By having
the
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creativity, artistic
students
 can promote the development of critical thinking and problem-solving skills as
students
 learn to approach tasks creatively. Another factor
makes
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 me believe that
art
 classes are indispensable to a child's development is
in corporation
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art
 into the curriculum
provides
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improves
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student's
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students's
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 mental health by offering them a form of emotional expression and stress relief. It is evident that listening
as well as
 playing an instrument, like the guitar and the piano, can unwind the mind and refresh the body with soft peaceful notes. In the form of drawing, scientists have found out that when individuals experience negative
feeling
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feelings
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, they tend to draw with dark
color
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colors
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 and in
a
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reverse
condition
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conditions
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, bright
color
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colors
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 is the expression to show out. In conclusion, each type of
art
 has its own way
to keep
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pupil's
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the pupil's
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 mind
stay
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healthy and unstressed.
Moreover
, critical thinking and problem-solving skills are
another
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 advantages of
art
 classes.
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