The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000
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The line graph represents the production levels of petroleum, natural gas and coal in the UK over the period from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, we can see that the production levels of petroleum were the highest throughout the period
while
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the production levels of coal were the lowest
at the end
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of the period. In 1981, the petroleum level was over 80
units
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.
Then
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, it sharply increased to reach 140
units
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and remained stable until 1987.
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, it experienced a decline to reach about 100
units
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in 1990.
However
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, it increased gradually from 1992 to 2000. It is interesting to notice that the level of natural gas remained the same for almost 10 years. After that, increased slightly from 1994 to 2000.
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, the level of coal fluctuated significantly between the first 5 years.
Then
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, it decreased slowly to reach around 37
units
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in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • overall decline
  • depletion
  • shift in energy policies
  • global oil prices
  • extraction technology
  • cleaner energy sources
  • technological advancements
  • investment in nuclear energy
  • diversification
  • traditional fossil fuels
  • sustainable options
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