The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000
The line graph represents the production levels of petroleum, natural gas and coal in the UK over the period from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the production levels of petroleum were the highest throughout the period while
the production levels of coal were the lowest at the end
of the period.
In 1981, the petroleum level was over 80 units
. Then
, it sharply increased to reach 140 units
and remained stable until 1987. Moreover
, it experienced a decline to reach about 100 units
in 1990. However
, it increased gradually from 1992 to 2000.
It is interesting to notice that the level of natural gas remained the same for almost 10 years. After that, increased slightly from 1994 to 2000. However
, the level of coal fluctuated significantly between the first 5 years. Then
, it decreased slowly to reach around 37 units
in 2000.Submitted by t.albadaei.ta on
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