‘The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.’

‘The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.’
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The two figures illustrate how Denham's town has been altered since 1986.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
although
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the main infrastructure of
this
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town has remained, most of the farmlands have been replaced by residential areas. On the one hand, in 1986, there were few houses along the
road
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which ended on the bridge that passed from River Stock.
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, in the east of the river, the post office and some shops were located which was on the west side of the primary school building.
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, there is a U-shaped house in the east-south of the town with gardens in front of it which was connected to the main
road
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.
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, most of the fields were farmlands where animals could spend their time there.
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, in 2016, most of the agricultural fields were replaced by residential areas along the main
road
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from the south to the north.
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the post office building
as well as
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the primary school have been in the same place where they were, the Primary school has been expanded from the east side.
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, the large house building not only got bigger but
also
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changed to a retirement home where its garden has been decreased and replaced by houses.
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, the main
road
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has experienced an expansion from the west side and it is constructed near the river.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, although, furthermore".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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