The road near your house is completely unsuitable for traffic. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: • Introduce yourself; • Explain what the problem is; • Tell what would you like to be done. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to bring to your

intention

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attention

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the issue that I am facing in our

city

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. The issues with the road in my residence. For that reason, I always get late to work or find

difficult

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it difficult

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to do some activities. Please let me explain about it. First of all, let me introduce

my self

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myself

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. My name is Yohanes Patricius, I am 40 years old and work as

accountant

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an accountant

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. I

live

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have lived

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this

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city

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since I was born here. I really love

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city

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as I

grown

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grew

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here and many unforgettable memories. The life quality is good enough and surrounded by many amazing

building

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buildings

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and places.

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, for the past

weeks

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weeks,

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I have experienced immense discomfort

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traffic

jam

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jams

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in my residence as the road has

many

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had many

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holes since

the

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apply

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last

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winter and many citizens here always give complaints to the major by

emails

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or letter. But,

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there

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is still no response until now. For that

reasons

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reason

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, I have attached many photos in

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letter to you to take appropriate action to tackle

this

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issue. You can ask the civil technician in our

city

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and they can resolve

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problem by mechanical approach. After that, you can prepare the funds to repair these hole roads. A prompt reply will be highly appreciated, Thank you in advance. Yours Faithfully Yohanes

patricius.yohanesTue May 21 2024

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task achievement

To improve task response, ensure that you address all points clearly. The mention of being late to work could be more directly connected to the unsuitable road condition.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure needs strengthening. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and flows logically from introduction to conclusion.

coherence cohesion

Improve coherence by providing clearer transitions between paragraphs and ideas. This will help in maintaining a steady flow of information.

task achievement

You have appropriately introduced yourself and provided relevant personal details.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for addressing local council officials.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and fit the context of the letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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