The road near your house is completely unsuitable for traffic. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: • Introduce yourself; • Explain what the problem is; • Tell what would you like to be done. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your intention
the issue that I am facing in our Correct your spelling
attention
city
. The issues with the road in my residence. For that reason, I always get late to work or find difficult
to do some activities. Please let me explain about it.
First of all, let me introduce Correct pronoun usage
it difficult
my self
. My name is Yohanes Patricius, I am 40 years old and work as Correct your spelling
myself
accountant
. I Add an article
an accountant
live
in Wrong verb form
have lived
this
city
since I was born here. I really love this
city
as I grown
here and many unforgettable memories. The life quality is good enough and surrounded by many amazing Add the auxiliary verb
grew
have grown
building
and places.
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buildings
However
, for the past weeks
I have experienced immense discomfort Add a comma
weeks,
due to
traffic jam
in my residence as the road has Fix the agreement mistake
jams
many
holes since Add a missing verb
had many
the
Correct article usage
apply
last
winter and many citizens here always give complaints to the major by emails
or letter. But, Fix the agreement mistake
email
it
is still no response until now.
For that Correct pronoun usage
there
reasons
, I have attached many photos in Fix the agreement mistake
reason
this
letter to you to take appropriate action to tackle this
issue. You can ask the civil technician in our city
and they can resolve this
problem by mechanical approach. After that, you can prepare the funds to repair these hole roads.
A prompt reply will be highly appreciated, Thank you in advance.
Yours Faithfully
YohanesSubmitted by patricius.yohanes on
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task achievement
To improve task response, ensure that you address all points clearly. The mention of being late to work could be more directly connected to the unsuitable road condition.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure needs strengthening. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and flows logically from introduction to conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by providing clearer transitions between paragraphs and ideas. This will help in maintaining a steady flow of information.
task achievement
You have appropriately introduced yourself and provided relevant personal details.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for addressing local council officials.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and fit the context of the letter.
