The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.
The given bar charts present the performance of a
bus
company from 1999 to 2003 where one compares the punctuality of its service between actual and targeted indicated in percentages, and another compares the number of complaints
per thousand passengers's
journey.
Remove the s
passengers'
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the
during the first four comparing years never accomplished its aims, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of in
2003 was the only year that its figure Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
for
Add an article
the bus
bus
arriving on Fix the agreement mistake
buses
time
had surpassing
its targeted goal. Change the verb form
surpassed
However
, it is interesting to note that unlike
its punctuality success, its Add the comma(s)
, unlike
complaints
was
by far the most among other the given Correct subject-verb agreement
were
time
frame.
To begin
with, in terms of arrival time
, in 1999 and 2000 company
Correct article usage
the company
were aiming
to pursue Wrong verb form
aimed
punctual
arrival Correct article usage
a punctual
time
at
86%, Change preposition
of
hence
, the actual number were
far behind Change the verb form
was
of
its goal at 1% and 4%, respectively. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, they dropped down
their milestoneChange preposition
apply
1
% more as a hope of accomplishment and yet they still have not made it in the end. Surprisingly, with Change preposition
by 1
Correct article usage
a slighly
slighly
fall of its target, the Correct your spelling
slight
bus
finally
outwin
its Change the verb form
outwins
dreamed
figure in 2003.
In regards Replace the word
dream
with
, Change preposition
to
disatisfaction
reports of the Correct your spelling
dissatisfaction
satisfaction
bus
service, in 1999 at about 70 complaints
received was the lowest figures
among the other years. Fix the agreement mistake
figure
Though
, there were fluctuation trends Correct word choice
However
of
the aforementioned reports between Change preposition
in
in
2000 and 2002 ranging from more than 80 to 110 Change preposition
apply
complaints
. In 2003, the satisfaction of the commuters were
not matched and Change the verb form
was
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
complaints
skyrocketed up
to 120Change preposition
apply
complains
.Verb problem
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, complaints, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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