7.The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
The bar chart provides information about the eight most popular online activities conducted by Slovakia with two
genders
throughout July as a percentage of overall
internet
users.
It can be seen that males and females have the highest usage in both
text or instant messaging and using
email. Verb problem
apply
In contrast
, with
Health Research females have almost doubled Change preposition
according to
Correct article usage
the percentages
percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
internet
user
compared to males. Interestingly, Fix the agreement mistake
users
both
genders
have
the least interested in Job Hunting.
Verb problem
are
According to
the figures, communication related
tasks were the most common for Add a hyphen
communication-related
both
sexes, especially using email and texting or instant messaging are
over 80% of total Change the verb form
is
internet
users for both
genders
. Whereas
for women, the most popular activities are social networking and internet
banking at around 78% and 76% respectively. On the other hand
, for men, internet
banking at 73% was slightly more important than social networking at 68%. While
streaming video/ music women slightly higher percentage at 52% while
men at 48%. Interestingly, males and females have an equal proportion in job hunting and online education.
Overall
, it is clear to see that both
two genders
use the most percentage of the internet
in
Change preposition
for
comuniation
related Correct your spelling
communication
task
, Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
while
other tasks are less.Submitted by sunnyrogle22 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words genders, internet, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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