The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of UK graduates and postgraduates
who go into the types of jobs, except for full-time work, done after leaving college in 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
graduate students
are ten times more than postgraduate students
. The highest number
of students
belonged to further
study, and the lowest number
of students
chose voluntary work in each chart.
In the first graph, we can see that 29,665 graduates decided to seek further
study in 2008 while
17,735 students
chose part-time employment and 3,500 graduates wanted to try voluntary work. According to
the graph, 16,225 students
were unemployed, almost the number
of students
who worked part-time job
.
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jobs
On the other hand
, on the second graph, 2.535 postgraduates
did part-time jobs, compared to only 345 students
who did voluntary jobs. Moreover
, we can see that 2,725 postgraduates
continued their studies while
1,625 postgraduates
were not in the workforce.Submitted by muxtasar1004 on
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