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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The bar charts illustrate the
number
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 of UK graduates and
postgraduates
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 who go into the types of jobs, except for full-time work, done after leaving college in 2008.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 graduate
students
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 are ten times more than postgraduate
students
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. The highest
number
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 of
students
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 belonged to
further
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 study, and the lowest
number
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 of
students
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 chose voluntary work in each chart. In the first graph, we can see that 29,665 graduates decided to seek
further
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 study in 2008
while
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 17,735
students
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 chose part-time employment and 3,500 graduates wanted to try voluntary work.
According to
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 the graph, 16,225
students
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 were unemployed, almost the
number
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 of
students
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 who worked part-time
job
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jobs
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.
On the other hand
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, on the second graph, 2.535
postgraduates
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 did part-time jobs, compared to only 345
students
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 who did voluntary jobs.
Moreover
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, we can see that 2,725
postgraduates
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 continued their studies
while
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 1,625
postgraduates
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 were not in the workforce.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, postgraduates, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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