The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The given map illustrates three possible places for establishing a supermarket in Ellington City.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
B point is very far away from facilities and all three points are not near the airport
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According to
the data, The
A point is surrounded by Correct article usage
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the
residential areas and countryside and is in the perfect place since there is a traffic-free zone just next to it. Correct article usage
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Also
, the park is just a few blocks away and is accessible by the railway as well as
will be close to Hampford city with a 30.000 population and is olny
15 minutes away. Correct your spelling
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Although
the pollution of the industrial zone will affect customers' health. The C point is located in the countryside but is fairly close to the residential area as well and the railway passes next to it though the industrial region is still a problem for the same reason.
On the other hand
, the B zone is also
considered in the countryside where just the motorway passes from there and is not close to the residential homes and other amenities such
as the park and the airport. But on the positive side, customers will enjoy fresh air because it is too far from industrial locations.Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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