The chart shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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of
residents
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buying
coffee
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and
tea
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in
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last
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the last
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4
weeks
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in
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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,
Brisbane
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,
Adelaide
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and
Hobart
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cities of Australia. The percentage of
individuals
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is
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are
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is
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shown based on 3 categories namely those who bought fresh
coffee
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, those with instant
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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and
who
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those who
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went to a café for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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. Among the five cities,
Sydney
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have
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has
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maximum
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a maximum
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43
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of 43
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% of
residents
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buying fresh
coffee
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while
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,
Hobart
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have
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has
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54% of local
individuals
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buying instant
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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.
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,
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Melbourne
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in Melbourne
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with
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apply
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63%
people
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of people
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visiting
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visited
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café to have
coffee
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or
tea
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in the past 4
weeks
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. Among the
residents
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buying fresh
coffee
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,
Sydney
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and
Melbourne
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show similar 43% and 42% but,
Hobart
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have
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has
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38% people.
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,
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apply
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Brisbane
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and
Adelaide
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also
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present similar 34%
individuals
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. Among the
individuals
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buying instant
coffee
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, on one
hand
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hand,
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Brisbane
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and
Adelaide
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have almost similar figures of 52% and 50%
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,
on the other
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hand
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hand,
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Sydney
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with 45%,
Melbourne
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with 48% and
Hobart
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with 54%
residents
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buying in the
last
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4
weeks
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. Among the
residents
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visiting café for
coffee
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or
tea
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,
Sydney
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,
Hobart
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and
Melbourne
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show similar values of 61%, 62% and 63%.
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,
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apply
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Brisbane
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and
Adelaide
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depict 55% and 49%
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individuals
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of individuals
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.
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, it is concluded that the
residents
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of the 5 cities who bought fresh
coffee
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were the lowest
while
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, those who went to the café to have
coffee
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or
tea
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were the highest which shows people prefer to consume
coffee
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at café which is not a health benefit for them.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, coffee, tea, weeks, sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, hobart, individuals, café with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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