The chart shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
residents
buying Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
in Use synonyms
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last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
in Use synonyms
Sydney
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Melbourne
, Use synonyms
Brisbane
, Use synonyms
Adelaide
and Use synonyms
Hobart
cities of Australia. The percentage of Use synonyms
individuals
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Correct subject-verb agreement
is
are
shown based on 3 categories namely those who bought fresh Correct subject-verb agreement
is
coffee
, those with instant Use synonyms
coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
4 Linking Words
weeks
and Use synonyms
who
went to a café for Correct determiner usage
those who
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in the Use synonyms
last
4 Linking Words
weeks
. Among the five cities, Use synonyms
Sydney
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have
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has
maximum
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a maximum
43
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of 43
residents
buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
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while
, Linking Words
Hobart
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have
54% of local Change the verb form
has
individuals
buying instant Use synonyms
coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
4 Linking Words
weeks
. Use synonyms
Additionally
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Melbourne
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in Melbourne
with
63% Change preposition
apply
people
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of people
visiting
café to have Wrong verb form
visited
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in the past 4 Use synonyms
weeks
.
Among the Use synonyms
residents
buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, Use synonyms
Sydney
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
show similar 43% and 42% but, Use synonyms
Hobart
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have
38% people. Change the verb form
has
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,
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apply
Brisbane
and Use synonyms
Adelaide
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also
present similar 34% Linking Words
individuals
.
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individuals
buying instant Use synonyms
coffee
, on one Use synonyms
hand
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hand,
Brisbane
and Use synonyms
Adelaide
have almost similar figures of 52% and 50% Use synonyms
while
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on the other
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hand
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hand,
Sydney
with 45%, Use synonyms
Melbourne
with 48% and Use synonyms
Hobart
with 54% Use synonyms
residents
buying in the Use synonyms
last
4 Linking Words
weeks
.
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residents
visiting café for Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
, Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Hobart
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
show similar values of 61%, 62% and 63%. Use synonyms
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,
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apply
Brisbane
and Use synonyms
Adelaide
depict 55% and 49% Use synonyms
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individuals
.
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of individuals
Therefore
, it is concluded that the Linking Words
residents
of the 5 cities who bought fresh Use synonyms
coffee
were the lowest Use synonyms
while
, those who went to the café to have Linking Words
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
were the highest which shows people prefer to consume Use synonyms
coffee
at café which is not a health benefit for them.Use synonyms
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