The chart shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
residents
buying coffee
and tea
in last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
in Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart
cities of Australia. The percentage of individuals
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
are
shown based on 3 categories namely those who bought fresh Correct subject-verb agreement
is
coffee
, those with instant coffee
in the last
4 weeks
and who
went to a café for Correct determiner usage
those who
coffee
or tea
in the last
4 weeks
. Among the five cities, Sydney
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
maximum
Correct article usage
a maximum
43
% of Change preposition
of 43
residents
buying fresh coffee
while
, Hobart
have
54% of local Change the verb form
has
individuals
buying instant coffee
in the last
4 weeks
. Additionally
, Melbourne
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in Melbourne
with
63% Change preposition
apply
people
Change preposition
of people
visiting
café to have Wrong verb form
visited
coffee
or tea
in the past 4 weeks
.
Among the residents
buying fresh coffee
, Sydney
and Melbourne
show similar 43% and 42% but, Hobart
have
38% people. Change the verb form
has
While
,
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apply
Brisbane
and Adelaide
also
present similar 34% individuals
.
Among the individuals
buying instant coffee
, on one hand
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hand,
Brisbane
and Adelaide
have almost similar figures of 52% and 50% while
, on the other
hand
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hand,
Sydney
with 45%, Melbourne
with 48% and Hobart
with 54% residents
buying in the last
4 weeks
.
Among the residents
visiting café for coffee
or tea
, Sydney
, Hobart
and Melbourne
show similar values of 61%, 62% and 63%. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
Brisbane
and Adelaide
depict 55% and 49% individuals
.
Change preposition
of individuals
Therefore
, it is concluded that the residents
of the 5 cities who bought fresh coffee
were the lowest while
, those who went to the café to have coffee
or tea
were the highest which shows people prefer to consume coffee
at café which is not a health benefit for them.Submitted by nikitanalawade681 on
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