The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australia water consumption for last year.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australia water consumption for last year.
The bar diagram illustrates the total amount of
water
used by six different Australian cities in the
last
year and the pie figure presents the proportion of distributed
water
to its resources in Australia in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Perth
consume
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a vast amount of
water
compared to others and most of it is used for the Agriculture sector.
To begin
with, the average annual
water
consumption in Perth registered 300 followed by Brisbane with 250. Adelaide came in third place and registered just under 250.
Furthermore
, Sydney, Melbourne and Canberra accounted for 200, 150 and 125 respectively.
Additionally
, in 2014, the fraction of
water
distribution was mainly occupied by agriculture, approximately two-thirds, and the
Households
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percentage was less than the first place by almost seven times. Both
water
, electricity and gas had the same ratio which was exactly 7%.
Moreover
, a petite Australian
water
distribution, at 4%, was seen in Manufacturing and other industries
while
mining came in
last
place with a microscopic 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average consumption
  • distribution
  • sector
  • domestic use
  • industrial use
  • agricultural use
  • urban areas
  • rural areas
  • trend
  • resource management
  • policy implications
  • ecosystem impact
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