Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.

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in society and the age distribution of criminal actors is extensive. There are various

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criminal

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divided by age

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is juvenile

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. The are some possible factors that lead

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crimes

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we will discuss some causes. The majority of

crimes

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are caused by

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povetry

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that say criminal actors have

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in low

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socioeconomic

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to survive.

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factor not only occurs in adult

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juvenile

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of

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the

crimes

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. In the cities,

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a family

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from low

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to survive and tend to do anything because of the need to survive.

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, in Indonesia, there are undearge that under arrest because steal

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medicine

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their parent and

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clearly

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povetry

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the cause of underage

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.

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, the

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povetry

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closely

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related to lack of

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because family from low socioeconomic

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would put

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, children that has limited

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differ what is right because sometimes in their environment, people

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survive

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rather than

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about what is right and they

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in Jakarta became

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because in their society it is a usual thing to do.

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, the majority

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of juvenile

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these problem

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help

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children from low socioeconomic

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to

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access

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education

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for

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education

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by giving

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or

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for

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people with low financial

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suggestion can help decrease

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of

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povetry

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poverty

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because

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could take

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to better opportunities and

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