The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010.
The maps show the developments that have taken place in
Stokeford
over a period of 80 years between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, Stokeford
transformed from farmland to housing. However
, there have been substantial changes in layout and facilities during the given period.
In 1930, the number of farmlands sited in two areas, which were in the east and south of Stokeford
. Moreover
, there were two shops and the post office were
located to the west of the Change the verb form
was
village
. On the upper side of this
village
, there was a bridge stretching from north to south, connecting the river stroke.
In 2010, there has
been considerable increase in residential areas and the farmland Verb problem
was
has been
removed from Wrong verb form
was
this
village
. The garden on the east side had been turned into a retirement home. Furthermore
, primary schools also grown
in size. The shops on the west side have disappeared and houses have been built in their place. The bridge still remains.
In conclusion, Add the auxiliary verb
have also grown
grew
Stokeford
has developed from a natural village
into a modern suburb.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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