*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

lines

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graph shows the data about

dynamic

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the dynamic

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of exporting issues of

there

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their

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countries for 5 years.

Although

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, there

is

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has been

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rapid

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increasing growth in Myanmar from 1999 when it was 0 which is the minimum, to the biggest point of 950

millions

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million

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of

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dollars in 2001.

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in

following

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the following

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year demand

to

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for

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their clothes decreased sharply to the volume of 350 $

mln

.

However

,

then

there was

positive

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a positive

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change in 2003. Obviously, we can see the best result for the

traiding

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training

trading

according to

Myanmmar's data. It's average is 650 $

mln

. Meanwhile other two countries present fluent indicators which are illustrated by the graph. They are different at the start (450 $

mln

. and 580 $

mln

.), almost are equal in

the

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2000 (over 500$

mln

.). At the same time

their

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the highest and the lowest mark

is

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are

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rather different.

Furthermore

, the top rank to Japan is 600$

mln

.,

while

to Columbia is 700 $

mln

.