The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the data about the dynamic of exporting issues of three countries for 5 years.
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, there has been rapidly increasing growth in Myanmar from 1999 when it was 0 which is the minimum, to the biggest point of 950 million dollars in 2001. On the one hand in the following year demand for their clothes decreased sharply to a volume of 350 $.
On the other hand
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,
then
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there was a positive change in 2003. Obviously, we can see the best result for the trading
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Myanmmar's description. It's average is 650 $. Meanwhile other two countries present fluent indicators which are illustrated by the chart. They are different at the start (450 $ and 580 $ ), but almost are equal in 2000 (over 500$ ). At the same time, the highest and the lowest marks are rather different.
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, the top rank to Japan is 600$,
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to Columbia is 700 $. Respectively, the lowest points are 480$ and 620$ both in 2003. Following the information the second place is after Columbia, and the third one is Japan.
Overall
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, there are 3 lines describing the exporting trade of clothes. The biggest changes are seen in the first category, contrasting small differences which are presented by the statistics of
two
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the two
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other categories.
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