The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
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shows
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energy
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1985 to 2000.
as we can see that in all the years the United States is almost the most Correct your spelling
from
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generating Correct your spelling
country
energy
all time, Also
we can see that Denmark
and India were almost the same in 1985 and 1990, There is a huge jump in the amount on
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of
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