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The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
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 bar chart
is showing
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 the amount of
the
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apply
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generated
energy
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 by the wind in four countries
form
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from
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 1985 to 2000. as we can see that in all the years the United States is almost the most
countre
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country
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 generating
energy
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 all time,
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 we can see that
Denmark
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 and India were almost the same in 1985 and 1990, There is a huge jump in the amount
on
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energy
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 generated in
Denmark
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 in 1995 it was 1200 and in 2000
it's increase
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then
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 1600,
Denmark
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 and United
states
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States
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 is the most
energy
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 generated countries in 2000, Germany is the less countre increase between all of the rest, in 1995 India and Germany are the same
amout
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amount
 800, But in 2000 India
increase
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then
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 1100. in
conlusion
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conclusion
, we can see that the United
states
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 and
Denmark
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 are the most generated countries
btween
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between
 all of them.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, denmark with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wind energy generation
  • megawatts (MW)
  • renewable energy
  • energy production
  • growth trend
  • decline
  • technological advancements
  • government policies
  • historical data
  • relative contribution
  • energy mix
  • comparison
  • renewable resources
  • sustainability
  • capacity
  • installations
  • annual production
  • percent increase/decrease
  • between 1985 and 2000
  • notable changes
  • country-specific trends
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