The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The graph illustrates the total
minutes
of consumption on telephone calls in three different categories, namely local-fixed line
, national and international-fixed line
and mobiles-all
calls, in the UK, between 1995 and 2002.
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mobile-all
Overall
, over the 7 years
period, Correct your spelling
7-year
although
local calls conserved their popularity, the
spending time on other calls Correct article usage
apply
have
an upward Correct subject-verb agreement
has
trend
. In particular
, using mobile phones increased significantly.
At
the beginning, in 1995, using the phone which has Change the preposition
In
fixed
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a fixed
line
for local communication was the most popular preference among public
, Add an article
the public
just
over 70 Change preposition
with just
billion
minutes
and demonstrated an upward trend
. Even though this
trend
peaked in 1998 (at 90 billion
minutes
), there was a decrease over the next three years and the total number of minutes
was almost equivalent with
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to
initial
value. Add an article
the initial
an initial
On the other hand
, national and international use of fixed
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fixed-line
line
phone
had a significant value with 37 Fix the agreement mistake
phones
billion
minutes
and soared steadily about by 23 billion
minutes
, this
upward trend
is also
valid for the figures of
mobiles, especially, after 1999, using mobile phone for calls increased sharply from roughly 14 to 45 Change preposition
for
billion
minutes
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