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Somepeople say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?Give reasons for your answer and incl

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In my opinion, it might be true because for some reasons.
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 in the context of culture, different
culture
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cultures
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 might bring non-fit acts,
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 food and beverage, dressing style, language, etc.
Second,
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 damage, bad tourists might
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environment
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the environment
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 by throwing trash anywhere,
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hurting
animal
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, or
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 cultural
artifact
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. But, I do believe that people tend to adjust themself
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 their environment. That's why it is important to give a general guideline in
tourism
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the tourism
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, accessible information
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and well-informed
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 marketing
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.
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, we can set a regulation to make
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tourists
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 align with our interests. We can design an immigration procedure, persuade tourists through
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 area guide, and educate them with signage,
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 on the location, or interactive web information.
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Include more specific examples to support your points, such as real-life cases or research findings about the negative effects of tourism.
coherence cohesion
Improve the introduction and conclusion to provide a more structured and comprehensive response. For example, you can briefly summarize your main points in the conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the essay flows logically from one point to another. Consider using transition words and phrases to enhance the coherence of your argument.
task achievement
You have addressed both parts of the question by discussing the negative effects of tourism and providing suggestions to mitigate these effects.
task achievement
Your ideas are relevant and relate well to the topic. Your suggestions for guidelines, accessible information centers, regulations, and educational materials are practical and feasible.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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