Art classes such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's developement as other subject, so it should be compulsory in high school. to what extend do you agree or disagree

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painting and drawing are vital for a child's development and should be valued as much as other subjects in high school.

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with

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statement and will write an essay to explain his opinion. It can not be undeniable that

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a useful technique that

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children improve their creativity and

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themselves. It is conclusion that

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subject

foster

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creativity and

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pupil

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use energy to solve

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problem

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in complex

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also

provide

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a platform for self-expression. Through painting and

drawing

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pupils are encouraged to identify and convey their

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,

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,

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to each other. Which is

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communication and

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with other people

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art

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seemed to be an effective technique to improve

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Critical Thinking and Problem-Solving,

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art

requires students to make decisions, solve

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and

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critically about their

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their

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experiment

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and

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to analyze their work journey and achieve more experiences. which is virtual to

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feeling. strengthens their analytical skills and enhances their ability to think creatively in various contexts. In

conclusion

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arts

classes

such

as drawing and painting ought to be added

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to high school curricula to help

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improve their creativity,

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children’s

express

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and

finally

help people

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logically.