The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The presented diagram illustrated the proportion of the British setting aside money

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donations

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periods between 1990 and 2010 It can be clearly seen from the bar chart that the number of

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in 1990,there was

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higher than in 2010.The individual spent the highest budget on donations at the age of 36-50 ( in 1990) meanwhile Britain people

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expenditure

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the lowest

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tally of aid by 18-25 ages (in 2010) Looking at the graph more closely ,one can see that regarding

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18-25 ages ,the statistic of the unpaid

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stood at 17%

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in ages,there was a rapid climb during in 1990 and 2010 .

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for donations

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at 42% and 34% respectively in 1990 and in 2010. As is described ,in the age of 51-65 ,there was a steady drop in the total of British

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at 35% in 1990.

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accounted for about 39% . What’s more,over the age of 65 ,there was a gradual decline in the

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of

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at 32% and 35% correspondingly in 1990 and 2010