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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph shows how much total
air
pollutants
 in
UK
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the UK
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 from 1990 to 2005 and it shows 3 different sources of
air
pollutants
( transport,
industry
 and
households
) in
UK
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the UK
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 at the same time. Total
air
pollutants
 in
UK
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the UK
show examples
 stood at 7
million
tonnes
 in 1990. After
that
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that,
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 it dropped dramatically to 4
million
tonnes
 in 1999 and remained stable until 2002. It decreased
agian
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again
 to 3
million
tonnes
 in 2005. The line graph shows
also
 3 different sources
af
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of
air
pollutants
, transport,
industry
 and
households
. Transport was the
higest
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highest
biggest
air
pollutants
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pollutant
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that
is
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are
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 nearly 6
millions
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million
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tonnes
 in 1990 and it fell gradually in 1993.
Then
 it plunged to 3
million
tonnes
 in 1996. After it slightly decreased
until
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to
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 2
million
tonnes
 in 2005.
Industry
 and
Households
 stood at 1
million
tonnes
 the same in 1990.
Industry
 slightly increased
in
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apply
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every three years and it
just
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was just
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 a little above 1
million
tonnes
 in 2005,
however
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however,
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households
 significantly fell every 3
yesrs
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years
. There were almost no
air
pollutants
 from
households
 in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, industry, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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