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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows how much total
air
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pollutants
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 from 1990 to 2005 and it shows 3 different sources of
air
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pollutants
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( transport,
industry
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 and
households
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) in
UK
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the UK
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 at the same time. Total
air
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pollutants
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 stood at 7
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. After
that
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that,
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 it dropped dramatically to 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 1999 and remained stable until 2002. It decreased
agian
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again
 to 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005. The line graph shows
also
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 3 different sources
af
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of
air
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pollutants
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, transport,
industry
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 and
households
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. Transport was the
higest
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highest
biggest
air
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pollutants
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pollutant
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that
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is
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are
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 nearly 6
millions
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million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and it fell gradually in 1993.
Then
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 it plunged to 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 1996. After it slightly decreased
until
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to
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 2
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005.
Industry
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 and
Households
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 stood at 1
million
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tonnes
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 the same in 1990.
Industry
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 slightly increased
in
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apply
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every three years and it
just
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was just
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 a little above 1
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005,
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however
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however,
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households
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 significantly fell every 3
yesrs
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years
. There were almost no
air
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pollutants
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 from
households
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 in 2005.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, industry, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • graph
  • data
  • sources
  • transportation
  • industry
  • domestic
  • trends
  • reduction
  • government policies
  • public awareness
  • comparison
  • significant
  • changes
  • environmental impact
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