The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph shows how much total
air
pollutants
in UK
from 1990 to 2005 and it shows 3 different sources of Correct article usage
the UK
air
pollutants
( transport, industry
and households
) in UK
at the same time.
Total Correct article usage
the UK
air
pollutants
in UK
stood at 7 Correct article usage
the UK
million
tonnes
in 1990. After that
it dropped dramatically to 4 Add a comma
that,
million
tonnes
in 1999 and remained stable until 2002. It decreased agian
to 3 Correct your spelling
again
million
tonnes
in 2005.
The line graph shows also
3 different sources af
Correct your spelling
of
air
pollutants
, transport, industry
and households
. Transport was the higest
Correct your spelling
highest
biggest
air
pollutants
Fix the agreement mistake
pollutant
that
is
nearly 6 Change the verb form
are
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
in 1990 and it fell gradually in 1993. Then
it plunged to 3 million
tonnes
in 1996. After it slightly decreased until
2 Change preposition
to
million
tonnes
in 2005.
Industry
and Households
stood at 1 million
tonnes
the same in 1990. Industry
slightly increased in
every three years and it Change preposition
apply
just
a little above 1 Add a missing verb
was just
million
tonnes
in 2005, however
Add the comma(s)
however,
households
significantly fell every 3 yesrs
. There were almost no Correct your spelling
years
air
pollutants
from households
in 2005.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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