Write about the following topic: Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.  In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Research has shown that learning English is very crucial for everyone nowadays.
On the other hand
, local
languages
have been forgotten and most people do not pay attention to learning one of them. I strongly believe that
this
is a phenomenon which must be stopped because, despite the fact that the English
language
is the common
language
for every civilisation, other
languages
are equally significant to be taught. If
this
does not occur briefly, these
languages
risk being lost.
Firstly
, without a doubt, we can tell that English is the main
language
and is logical to be taught at school.
Children
who are young learn more easily than adults,
thus
it is important for them to learn a
language
which they can speak wherever they go.
After
this
, they can learn other
languages
too. The choice of another
language
can rely on the purposes of a child,
for instance
, if he wants to study abroad and more specifically in France, it would be positive for him to learn the French
language
. Another case is to choose to learn a second
language
without any specific reason. In
this
case, parents usually choose the
language
and push their
children
to learn it.
However
, we should try to maintain local
languages
because behind every
language
exists a civilisation with its history and whether a
language
dies out, maybe the whole history will be forgotten. Of course,
this
is something that should not occur because every country's history and culture are major parts of
this
.
For
this
reason, the smallest thing that we can do to help is to encourage
children
to learn more local
languages
.
This
is something that will not lose its value. I mean that the more
languages
you know, the better results will have in your future career.
Moreover
, schools should modify their schedule and add more local
language
choices.
Thus
children
will have the opportunity to learn a local
language
and to help
this
not to die out. In conclusion, in my opinion, to help survive local
languages
is valuable because we must think about these countries. Do you like the Greek
language
to be forgotten? I do not think so.
Thus
the solution is between us and schools. Both of us can help with posing new generations to learn and maintain local
languages
.
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