You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you
Hi Valentine,
I hope you are doing well, I am writing to inform you about my new
life
in New York. Since I moved here, my life
turned out to be everything I have always dreamed about. What lead
to me taking Wrong verb form
led
this
decision was my past monotonous life
past, therefore
, what is better than the city that never sleeps? As you can remember, I was stuck in a daily and yearly routine, to put it more simply, at the morning gym workout class, secondly
my university class, whose the most of time Add a comma
secondly,
were
static without any practice, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
finally
home and dinner. I changed my Correct word choice
and finally
life
a lot since I came here, where there is not
sign of Correct your spelling
no
staticness
but far from it, because of that Correct your spelling
statics
i
really need resilient legs for the countless Change the capitalization
I
kilometers
at high speed. I do have my timetable Change the spelling
kilometres
life
completely filled-up
, Correct your spelling
filled
with
master, work to maintain my lifestyle and all domestic expenditures. I have been trying to spare some money, but Change preposition
up with
i
could not help but spend money without even realising it. I am Change the capitalization
I
tried
to fit well in Wrong verb form
trying
this
new scenario of my life
. It has been really difficult but i
do not want to have regrets but trying.
Change the capitalization
I
Anyway
I've got to go work now. I Add the punctuation
Anyway,
will
love Wrong verb form
would
hearing
from you.
Missing you
MariagraziaChange the verb form
to hear
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coherence cohesion
Ensure you maintain a clear and logical structure throughout your letter. Breaking up longer paragraphs can help with readability.
task achievement
Check for minor grammar and punctuation errors to improve the overall quality.
task achievement
Try to include a bit more detail about your experiences and feelings to make your letter more vivid and engaging.
coherence cohesion
Your writing tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You covered all the required points in the prompt - when you moved, why you chose the country, and how things are now.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,