Write a letter to a friend to inform him/her about a job opening in your company. Describe the job; 1) write about the job. 2) How is it suitable for your friend? 3) How to apply for the job.
Dear Emil Khan,
I hope
this
letter finds you in excellent circumstances and you are doing well. for long
time we Change the article
a long
hardely
Correct your spelling
had
ever
Correct your spelling
never
meet
after finished senior high school. I am writing to inform you Wrong verb form
met
regard
opening new Change the form of the verb
regarding
requied
new Correct your spelling
required
employess
at my Correct your spelling
employees
company
. I have been operated
my Wrong verb form
operating
company
two
years ago. Change preposition
for two
Moreever
if you Correct your spelling
Moreover
Add a missing verb
are intrested
intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
office
you Add an article
the office
an office
able
Add a missing verb
are able
Fix the infinitive
to apply
apply
a job.
Add the preposition
apply for
Currently
my security has Add a comma
Currently,
resign
Change the verb form
resigned
at
my Change preposition
from
company
because he want
to leave Change the verb form
wants
in
Lombok island. and now I need Change preposition
apply
somepeople
change the position. during Correct your spelling
some people
a
day you just spend time Correct article usage
the
keep
Wrong verb form
keeping
area
around a Add an article
the area
company
approximately
7 to 8 hours per day.
I believe you feel suitable if you join Change preposition
for approximately
with
my office. Change preposition
apply
i
will give you any provide like free wife, free Change the capitalization
I
luch
, and more Correct your spelling
lunch
purchase
.
If you Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
Add a missing verb
are intrested
intrested
in to apply a job you can submit all documents on Correct your spelling
interested
google
Capitalize word
Google
doc
Fix the agreement mistake
Docs
consist
of Wrong verb form
consisting
identificat
, certificate, number phone, Correct your spelling
identification
letter
Correct word choice
and letter
hospital
. Change preposition
of hospital
Morever
you Correct your spelling
Moreover
able
Add a missing verb
are able
Fix the infinitive
to apply
apply
a job Add the preposition
apply for
directely
via post.
thank you some much for your attention in advance. I Correct your spelling
directly
going
to happy hear if you Wrong verb form
am would be
intrested
and Correct your spelling
interested
join
Wrong verb form
joining
with
us.
Change preposition
apply
Wram
Wishes.
Correct your spelling
Warm
habib
.Change the capitalization
Habib
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Grammar and Spelling
Pay attention to spelling and grammatical errors. For instance, phrases like "for long time" and "Morever" should be corrected to "for a long time" and "Moreover," respectively.
Organization
Make sure you are clearly dividing different points into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should convey a single idea to improve readability.
Tone
Try to adopt a more formal but friendly tone. For example, "I will be happy to hear from you" would sound more pleasant and appropriate.
Detailed Information
You have provided important details on the job opening, such as the role, responsibilities, and benefits.
Positive Closing
The closing of your letter is polite and inviting, which encourages your friend to consider the opportunity.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,