Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subject, so it should be compusory in high schools. To what extent do you argee or disagree ?

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related to

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, like drawing or painting

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playing

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a crucial role in the growth of a child,

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, high schools should let

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learn as an obligation class.

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author disagrees with the statement because

art

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cognitive development
Critical thinking
Problem-solving
Creativity
Emotional expression
Emotional intelligence
Cultural awareness
Global awareness
Fine motor skills
Collaboration
Social skills
Teamwork
Retention
Creative process
Career opportunities
Arts education
Symbolic expression
Empathy
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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subject, so it should be compusory in high schools. To what extent do you argee or disagree ?

Your opinion

You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you write a letter to your friend.In the letter: •give detalis about the concert •describe how you won the tickets •explain why you 've chosen your friend to go with you

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant