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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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graphes
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graphs
 compare the amounts of three age groups between
Yemen
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 and Italy in 2000 and 2050.
Overall
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, the proportion of individuals
who
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aged from 0-14
years
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 old is expected to decline in both two
counties
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countries
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,
while
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 the population of
people
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 aged over 60
years
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 has an opposite trend. Apart from that, there is a
different
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difference
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 change for
people
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 between 15 to 59 in
two
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the two
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 nations. It is clear from the charts that there were 46.3%
dwellers
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of dwellers
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 aged in the range of 15-59 in
Yemen
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 in 2000, but it is predicted to increase to 57.3% in 2050.
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, that figure for Italy was 61.6% in 2000 and
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 to decrease to 46.2% in 2050, which is close to the beginning of
Yemen
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.
Similarly
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, the number of
people
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 who
is
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are
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 over 60
years
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 old
see
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shows
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 an upward trend in
two
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the two
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 countries. As for
Yemen
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, Individuals aged over 60 accounted for 3.6% in 2000
,
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apply
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 and will rise to 5.7% in 2050. Those
figure
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figures
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 for Italy are 24.1% and 42.3% respectively.
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, it seems
less
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people
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 are willing to have a baby in the future. In
Yemen
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,
people
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 under 14
years
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 old took up
for
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50.1% in 2000, falling to 37.0% in 2050. Meanwhile, in Italy, that age group started with 14.3% but
drop
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dropped
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 to 11.5% in 2050.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, years, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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