The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
oThe
bar chart illustrates the amount of calories that Correct your spelling
The
are
consumed by people in seven different countries between the years 1975 and 2000.
Wrong verb form
were
Overall
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it is clear that
calorie consumption in all countries Linking Words
increases
in the second year of record. Wrong verb form
increased
Moreover
, Bangladesh came in Linking Words
last
place in both years.
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To begin
with, in 1975, the number of Linking Words
individual's
calorie consumption in Brazil accounted for 2,500 and came in first place followed by Pakistan and Nigeria which were at approximately 2,300 and 2,100 respectively. Change noun form
individual
Furthermore
, the other four countries comprising China, Indonesia, India and Bangladesh had almost the same number, at roughly 2,000.
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Additionally
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Brazil
calories noticeably climbed to around 3,000 in the year 2000 Change noun form
Brazil's
as well
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as
China and Indonesia dramatically went up to almost the same level as Correct word choice
and
Brazil
. Pakistan and India Change noun form
Brazil's
also
escalated to well under 2,500. Linking Words
Besides
, the narrowest gap was seen in Bangladesh which was about 300.Linking Words
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