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The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.
The given figure depicts how many changes happened in the site of Hounderstone
Town
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 at present and a proposed plan for it.
Overall
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, as can be clearly seen that in the map, the place had been completely changed except for both of
town
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centre
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 and the gas station. Now,the place was divided into 4 sections. The
town
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centre
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 is in the southeast Which is faced by a gas station in the southwest. The railway was in the same section in both places.
However
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, the airfield was in the northwest
While
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 they were up for the roundabout . In the proposed plan, the site was divided into 5 sections. The airfield was removed by the industrial estate.
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, they will be added to street A4 down in the gas station.
Then
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, they will continue into A4 reaching the
town
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centre
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.
In contrast
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, the roundabout will enlarged behind of
town
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centre
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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