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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives
infromation
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information
 about the rate of
hours
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 every teacher spent teaching in various schools in many countries in the year 2001.
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, the chart
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 a group of countries
that
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namely Japan , Spain ,
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USA
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the USA
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 and Iceland . With three types and as can be
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 the highest number was in the
USA
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 . First of all, there was a significant increase at upper ar
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 to reach the hit peak in the
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 period to accounted for approximately 1200 at the same in the beginning the orange line was growth till middle period after that decline moderately
then
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 quickly at
USA
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 figure . in primary's
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Japan started
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munber
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number
 of
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 600
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 following that
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 upward trend in Spain after which
decreas
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decrease
decreased
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blue
 line in
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USA
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the USA
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 to Made up above 700
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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