The table gives information about the water use in three sectors in six countries.

The table gives information about the water use in three sectors in six countries.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table gives information about the water use in three sectors in six countries.
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details pertaining to
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water
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usage across three different fields by six nations. In general, the amount of
water
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used for agricultural activities was the highest
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domestic saw the lowest usage, with the exception of Australia and
Russia
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. With regards to the details for agriculture,
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consumption in
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was higher than
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countries, accounting for 1863m³. It was followed by Turkey and Canada, making
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1482m³ and 1238m³, respectively. Regarding
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the
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for industrialisation, the figures for Canada, Turkey and the UK have the most utilisation, ranging from nearly 400 to 832m³. Concurrently, industry in
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is not as dynamic, as
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country only consumes 56m³ of
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. Moving onto the amount of
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consumed by households, Australia was the
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more
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than the others, standing at 341m³, followed by Canada and
Russia
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with 279m³ and 98m³.
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witnessed the lowest, at less than roughly 40m³ of the UK.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, russia, m³ with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption patterns
  • agricultural sector
  • industrial water use
  • domestic water consumption
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • disparities
  • efficiency
  • sustainability
  • government policies
  • managing
  • regulating
  • regions
  • factors influencing
  • comparative analysis
  • water resources
  • resource management
  • sector-specific use
  • data comparison
  • water scarcity
  • usage trends
  • conservation efforts
  • allocation of resources
  • water footprint
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