The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart illustrates how many

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kilometers

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of passengers on five different types of transport in the United Kingdom

from

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between

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1990 and 2000.

Overall

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, the total of

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kilometers

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travelling

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was

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apply

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increase

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by passengers.

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, buses and trains were significantly more popular except for bicycle, air and motorbike

ovet

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over

the period. Looking at the figures in

further

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detail, it can be seen that the number of

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kilometers

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travelled by bus was the highest roughly 40

billion

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and followed by rail just under 40

billion

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. In 2000, the figure for total passengers rose from 100 to 110

billion

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kilometers

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. Turning to the remaining statistics, both

bicycle

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and

motorbike

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motorbikes

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in 1990

was

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larger than

2000

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in 2000

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around 1 and 2

billion

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except for the figure for air in 2000 rose slightly

about

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billion

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