Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs like heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to freely buy other more socially acceptable drugs like tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and consumption of ‘hard’ drugs should be applied to other more widely tolerated drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

The regulation to prohibit cocaine and heroin is widely agreed over the world,

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, the use of

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and

alcohol

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is still debated. I believe that the government have an accountable background

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categorizing chemical material based on the

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impacts

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on the

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.

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Tobacco

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and

alcohol

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are harmful, they have less impact on

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comparing cocaine and heroin.

Tobacco

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and

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cause disease only in long-term and excessively

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cocaine and heroin have instant effects

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as hallucination and brain damage. Each people have a different tolerance for

alcohol

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and the instant effect of consuming

alcohol

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is intoxication,

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for

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, there was a study that proved the effects of smoking on the

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occur after 10 years of continuous consumption. Based on

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, I believe that

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and

alcohol

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are still allowed to be distributed.

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, the distribution of

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and

tobacco

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should be restricted to avoid excessive and underage consumers. As we know, they still have side effects

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as lack of self-control, heart damage and stroke though they occur only after consuming for

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,

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, the government should still controlling. In Indonesia,

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, there was a boy who smoked since he was 9 and he was diagnosed with various

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problems

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as obesity and high blood pressure at a young age.

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, restricting more tolerated

drugs

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is still needed especially to avoid buyers from children and overconsumption.

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, the government have an accountable reason to ban hard

drugs

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based on their

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on

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and

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regulation

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on research about the dangers to the

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. Yet, other

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which are more tolerated should be restricted from distribution and consumption

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the fact that people are able to consume

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and it is undoubtedly that these

drugs

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have bad

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on the

body

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. In my mind, prohibiting certain

drugs

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is the right regulation to prevent bad

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on people's bodies.