THE graph bolow givas information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph compares five different regions in terms of arrivals of international
tourist
.
Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Overall
, all countries considered an increase
, the USA and France were
experienced some fluctuationsUnnecessary verb
apply
increased
, Verb problem
apply
while
other
three regions considered a small Correct article usage
the other
increase
.
As the grap
shows, The Correct your spelling
graph
USA
figure started at 70 Change noun form
USA's
millions
tourists and experienced a small Change to singular
million
increase
to around 85 millions
, Change to singular
million
then
, the international tourist
arrival keep
climbed to approximately 90 Change the verb form
keeps
millions
and declined slightly to about 89 million between 2005 and 2010, respectively. Regarding Change to singular
million
the
Correct article usage
apply
France
international Change noun form
France's
tourist
arrivals, it was
started at 50 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
, Change to singular
million
then
it experienced steady growth to just over 60 millions
in 2000. Change to singular
million
Afterward
, the number of international Change the spelling
Afterwards
tourist
Change to a plural noun
tourists
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
increaed
to reach Correct your spelling
increased
the
peak Correct article usage
a
with
exactly 89 Change preposition
of
milions
the same as the USA in the same year Correct your spelling
millions
million
of
2010.
By Change preposition
in
constrast
, between 1995 to 2010, Malaysia experienced a small Correct your spelling
contrast
increase
from over 20 millions
to over 40 Change to singular
million
millions
. Meanwhile, Egypt and Brazil started at the same 10 Change to singular
million
millions
in 1995 and Change to singular
million
increase
slightly to about 18 Wrong verb form
increased
millions
and 15 Change to singular
million
millions
, respectively.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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