THE graph bolow givas information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of international visitors who travelled to five different countries between 1995 and 2010
with
five-year intervals. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in millions.
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Overall
, it is clear that
travellers are interested in going to the USA the most. However
, they do not choose Brazil as their destination.
To begin
with, the USA sightseers occupied 70 in 1995 and shot up to well under 90 in the year 2000. It continuously escalated to roughly 92 in 2005 before slightly going down to 90 in the last
year of record. Furthermore
, the volume of tourists in France came in second place in 1995 with 30 and surged to the same number as in America with 90 in 2010. Moreover
, Malaysia which was at 20 in the first year soared to nearly 50 in 2010 and remained in third place throughout the period.
Additionally
, Egypt and Brazil had almost the same trajectory. In 1995, they were at approximately 8 together and then
the gap further
widened, ending the record at 20 and 15 respectively.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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