The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
Contained in the pie chart is data pertaining to three types of employees in
Australia
.
Additionally
, the line graph provides dynamics for the proportion of three different joblessness groups from 1993 to 2003.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the majority of the workforce
were
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born in
Australia
. It can
also
be observed that the nonemployment rate for all three groups decreased during the decade.
To begin
, with 76%, the workers who were born in
Australia
had the biggest proportion.
Furthermore
, it can
also
be noted that the figures for
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speaking countries (
NESC
) and
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countries (
ESC
) were quite similar. The percentage of
NESC
spent at 14% which was 4% higher than the
ESC
. Turning to the remaining detail,
it is clear that
NESC
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the highest rate of joblessness
while
ESC
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always the lowest. At the beginning of the period,
NESC
tops the line graph, it started at over 7% before decreasing to nearly 4% by the end of the period. In terms of
ESC
which
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the smallest, spent at least over 3% in 1993.
Then
, there was a decline that
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down to approximately 1%.
Similarly
, workers who were born in
Australia
decreased slightly from 4% to over 2%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, nesc, esc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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